Tuesday, March 27, 2012

The Devils Hands Comments

Rating: 4.7

The Demons of hell
could live next door
The Devil and his son
could be under your floor
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Dave Alan Walker
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(De Va) 23 August 2012

another insightful write...your soul sees beyond this earth..blessings...deva

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Sharon Smith 10 April 2012

A subject that some will not approach as it means that they might just have to admit he does exist. I don't usually do this but, if you are interested, please read 'Afflicted' as it keeps in context with what you have written. Enjoyed your courage with this poem..that is what inspired me about this one. Thankyou. Regards...Sharon.

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Unwritten Soul 09 April 2012

If we look too much devil not mean the angel was gone, call them from their inner...dont blame others as self-devil reflect comes when the desired uncontrollable, so bring an angel side to consult when we to decide ...as long as we live the pro and contras always there, black and white will exist so take the best for any step_Unwritten Soul

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Martin O'Neill 06 April 2012

Damn! and there was I thinking it looks like being a lovely day. Great poem, it is all to easy to coexist with evil unknowingly - take my wife for instance.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 April 2012

If we do not do any evil to others, then the devil itself eliminated from the earth....

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Parithi Muthurasan 28 March 2012

The Demons of hell could live next door The Devil and his son could be under your floor-not only these lines but the whole poem is very good

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Ramesh Rai 27 March 2012

Really, evil is everywhere. a great poem

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