Wednesday, November 22, 2006

The Devil Went To Bed Comments

Rating: 5.0

It came with a flash,
the sound was deafening.
Felt like a whip-lash,
I didn't expect anything.
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David Darbyshire
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Tailor Bell 22 November 2006

a devilish bit of knavery in this piece it seems, Dave. intriguing work and nice flow. -Tailor

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Original Unknown Girl 22 November 2006

Very good Dave.... seems there's a devil theme amongst us poets today! I like this one.... shall try to stay good.... HG: -)

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Emily Newland 22 November 2006

i do agree...Its a peace of mind it gives u. its far better' to saty good instead' emz

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Martine Kolber 22 November 2006

It is not always easy 'to stay good instead', but the will to stay so makes it worth trying, I will do so too..

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