The Devil At Midday Comments

walk the midday sun walking with devil...the image you paint is perfectly in tune with the emotions inside there...good surrealistic write...10

When thoughts run riot and the body is calm The devil walks and slowly takes hold And take us to the death from misery untold..............Good Write............

I agree with Kale's first line (not sure that I follow the rest of what he says) . Very effectively expressed. In line 4, do you perhaps mean 'pass on by and by'? Just a thought.

Subtle, dark, short and to the point... Walking with the devil can be confusing to many; simply surrender yourself and let the overwhelming power of the universe take you to a place where nothing else matters. Let the 'devil' take control of an otherwise struggling existence.