Ha look at you
Your friends are all amuse
And you sit there;
About your life still confuse
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I am compelled by this piece to say THANK YOU FOR AN OPPORTUNUTY OF SEEING SOMETHING AS BEAUTIFUL AS THIS. I love this poem. Thanks a million
This poem captured the battles of mind human being go through daily. Man is divided into two - to succumb or shun satanic overtures. Great write. Keep the pen flowing
Well-written.... We must fight the devil as I invite you to visit my EMERGE VICTORIOUS.... a highest 10, Roshana...
I love the second to last stanza on this one - very powerful indeed. I like how you don't sugarcoat these strong emotions or hold back on your thoughts. I can almost picture the anger flowing out of you as you write!
Sadly the devils work is never done, and sometimes we do it for him. Excellent poem.
That's he's not helping you through these never ending odds. Jehovah ain't helping. A line thoughtful. We often think, 'Does Lord exists'? But courageously written. Quite positive attitude.
He is doing his work but we are following him blindly. A good poem. Thanks
A different thought. A struggle between good and evil. We are here to choose our lifestyle. But don't falter, each step must be stern and courageous without any fear.