Thursday, April 27, 2017

The Devil At His Work Comments

Rating: 4.4

Ha look at you
Your friends are all amuse
And you sit there;
About your life still confuse
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Roshana Phillips
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Bisy Untan 13 May 2017

A different thought. A struggle between good and evil. We are here to choose our lifestyle. But don't falter, each step must be stern and courageous without any fear.

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 12 May 2017

I am compelled by this piece to say THANK YOU FOR AN OPPORTUNUTY OF SEEING SOMETHING AS BEAUTIFUL AS THIS. I love this poem. Thanks a million

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Babatunde Aremu 11 May 2017

This poem captured the battles of mind human being go through daily. Man is divided into two - to succumb or shun satanic overtures. Great write. Keep the pen flowing

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Roshana Phillips 11 May 2017

Thank You Babatunde Aremu

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 May 2017

Well-written.... We must fight the devil as I invite you to visit my EMERGE VICTORIOUS.... a highest 10, Roshana...

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Georgina Murray 02 May 2017

I love the second to last stanza on this one - very powerful indeed. I like how you don't sugarcoat these strong emotions or hold back on your thoughts. I can almost picture the anger flowing out of you as you write!

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Roshana Phillips 02 May 2017

I'm glad you like it

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Ace Of Black Hearts 02 May 2017

Sadly the devils work is never done, and sometimes​ we do it for him. Excellent poem.

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Roshana Phillips 02 May 2017

Thank You Ace Of Black Hearts

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Randhir Kaur 28 April 2017

That's he's not helping you through these never ending odds. Jehovah ain't helping. A line thoughtful. We often think, 'Does Lord exists'? But courageously written. Quite positive attitude.

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Roshana Phillips 28 April 2017

Thank You

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 April 2017

He is doing his work but we are following him blindly. A good poem. Thanks

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