Thursday, September 1, 2016

The Devil Comments

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He is my biggest competetor
The biggest obstacle between me and my success elevator
He's the summation of all the bad and the evil
The only cause to all my agonies is THE DEVIL
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Ipseeta Patel
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Chinedu Dike 08 February 2017

An insightful portrayal of Devil 😈 as a source of darkness and evil, nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely motivational poem indeed. Faith keeps those that keep the faith. Thanks for sharing Ipseeta.

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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2016

You are so right, Ipseeta, most of the time we are our own devil.

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