Saturday, November 5, 2011

The Detective Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world has forced me to create vacuum
In my mind in which for universe has no room.
It is self contained as had then become I am
And faced now and then perpetual gloom.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Anjandev Roy 29 June 2020

Such a wonderful write......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2019

The dejection too was unable to me captivate And I concluded the death as my confident. Why shouldn't I serve the motherland I felt To expose the betrayers being a Detective? ....outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is so nicely executed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Dejection! With the muse of the world. Nice work.

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Agatha Eliza 18 October 2015

Wonderfully written..From the poems I read so far, I do realise that your poetry matches the aspects of life, depicted in a very realistic manner. I really like this.10 +++

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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