Saturday, September 10, 2011

The Destruction Of This World Comments

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I will tear down this world and burn away the night
As the broken clock echoes on through the ages
To see once more your hearts infallible light
I shall free the demons from their cages
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Colm Hayes
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Stefanie Fontker 24 September 2011

'I shall free the demons from their cages.' An interesting metaphor. Very beautiful writing.

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Unwritten Soul 10 September 2011

'As the broken clock echoes on through the age’s '..beautiful lines here... The destruction of this world is from our hand...maybe some of us protecting some us harm it too...it cause it slowly destroy by demons in cage..and caged in behavior Nice write Colm Hayes_Unwritten SOul

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