Friday, April 13, 2007

The Destruction Of Hate-Murder The Beast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brought up in a prejudice dysfunctional household.
Took away the heart that once lived within your soul
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Melvina Germain
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Lipstick Casanova 05 May 2007

What goes around comes around. Life is specked with bits of irony, and hate will definitely be torn down, deconstructed and made pitiful just like this hollow excuse of a man - even though he was really hollow in the first place, now he can be so in a different way. This piece is an exquisite example of poetic justice at work. -L.C.

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Malini Kadir 26 April 2007

burning hate.....takes time to heal but........your words are sound... makes one begin right away.........thank you.........for this write..............

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Sylvia Spencer 18 April 2007

Melvina a hate filled life what good does it do your poem has a great discription of this subject. well done you have written some great work cheers Sylviex

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Theodora Onken 18 April 2007

Absolutely brillant write...and i so identified with a lot of it! Blessings, Theo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 April 2007

Very true Melvina... There is no excuse for a hate filled life..

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Melvina>>>Like this this piecea lot, my dear...Wise words from a wise mind... Couplets work well here, ... FJR

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JoAnn McGrath 13 April 2007

applause.applause.....and amen Melvina: O)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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