Monday, August 12, 2013

The Destiny.. Comments

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The paper boats that are folded,
With cute little fingers and hands,
Waiting for the rain to run collecting the mud,
From the streets of haunted visuals,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 August 2013

Living trees on the shores always get shocked. A concern for environment - destruction and pollution. Beautiful poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 August 2013

the last line is a magical one, Veeraiyah, so potently it captures the poem's spirit.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 August 2013

flaring smile, good write, I like it, thanks. Please read my new poems and say something.

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