Wednesday, October 19, 2016

The Destination Comments

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The Senior went out saying, "Junior, see my mine"
And did not return,
Day after day, many days passed,
One day the Junior became the Senior
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Muzahidul Reza
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

One day the Junior became Senior! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Paul Warren 20 October 2016

The generations go on with new for old. I like the way you have structured this poem with a message for the world.

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Offeliya Seema 19 October 2016

Excellent, spiritual poem with high in meaning

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2016

Days after days pass. We see only. Remembering senior's return is amazing and interesting. This poem is wonderfully drafted and shared.10

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Muzahidul Reza

Muzahidul Reza

Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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