Monday, April 6, 2009

The Despicable Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

You were my boss
I was beneath you and never above you.
I respected you and worshipped the ground you walked on.
I enjoyed our professionalism.
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Premila Patel
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Yvonne Selase 14 April 2009

very good write premila. thanks for commenting on my poems

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 April 2009

yet it flows with passionate feeling, dedication seems to be unrequitted, wrought ingenious by lucidity, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Lynne Howard 11 April 2009

Very well written Premila and I am sure a lot of people can relate to it. Mutual respect is so important but even more so, self respect. Thank you for sharing.10++++

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Gabby Chamberland 06 April 2009

i love the way you write! i thik=nk that you would like my poem 'weapon of choice'.

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