Dreaming under the desert starry sky
Thinking of days gone by
Moon walks with me
And sand falls through the fingers
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such a marvellous poem..yes the moonlight is soothing n specially in a desert night
of all your poems i chose this title, , and trust me the poem soothes the soul.thanx
Story of every deserts if would have had been the same, life would not have been deserted with the thoughts.Breezes after a scorching sun are always beautiful as genuine are its feelings imbibed from Rahim Yaar Khan to Ajmer and Jaisalmeer.
This poem really provokes the image of a night in the desert in the mind of the reader vividly. It is written very well. The contrast between the cool grains of sand and the burnt soul gives something special to the poem. Excellent
this is truly an exceptional poem, , , , respect