Friday, April 5, 2013

The Desert Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dreaming under the desert starry sky
Thinking of days gone by
Moon walks with me
And sand falls through the fingers
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Yasmin Khan
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Kanav Justa 24 May 2013

this is truly an exceptional poem, , , , respect

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Kavya . 24 May 2013

such a marvellous poem..yes the moonlight is soothing n specially in a desert night

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R.k Das 09 May 2013

of all your poems i chose this title, , and trust me the poem soothes the soul.thanx

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 May 2013

Story of every deserts if would have had been the same, life would not have been deserted with the thoughts.Breezes after a scorching sun are always beautiful as genuine are its feelings imbibed from Rahim Yaar Khan to Ajmer and Jaisalmeer.

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Hira Akhtar 25 April 2013

nice theme sketched......

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Indira Babbellapati 17 April 2013

Good read. Short n sweet...

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Valerie Dohren 14 April 2013

Beautifully descriptive and very atmospheric. Lovely read.

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Medht Ghussn 07 April 2013

When we need some one we must walk under light moon

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Hans Vr 06 April 2013

This poem really provokes the image of a night in the desert in the mind of the reader vividly. It is written very well. The contrast between the cool grains of sand and the burnt soul gives something special to the poem. Excellent

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