Sunday, May 16, 2010

The Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look to the misty mountains,
that rise up so far away.
Look through the purple curtain,
that brightens with the coming day.
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Juan Olivarez
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Bert Bell 10 October 2010

Beautiful feeling in this poem. You are obviously a man who enjoys the outdoors. Nice use of metaphor and well-painted word pictures. Well done.

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