Tuesday, May 8, 2012

The Desert Comments

Rating: 4.3

She's learning about the desert
where things are not as flat as they seem.
She needs the plain, the wind, scrub,
no longer believes mirages
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Jill Jones
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

She's like plants at ground level surviving as seeds through dry periods —there is great depth in this bit of expression. An excellent poem with a catchy title...appreciated.

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Benjamin Chiu Uy 22 October 2019

Magnificient poem by Jill Jones The road where past and the future meets, only at the horizons and there’s all that walking in between

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Smoky Hoss 29 September 2018

eternally everywhere, only bidding us enter into, along with, walking, seeking, discovering...

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Smoky Hoss 29 September 2018

The lesson of the desert timeless, out there, in here,

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