Monday, April 9, 2018

The Depressed Comments

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THE DEPRESSED
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people in sorrow
drown.slowly; have.date with death
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narayana aghalaya
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Richard Wlodarski 16 December 2022

Sympathy, empathy and creativity so masterfully weaved into this extraordinary poem.

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Kevin Patrick 16 December 2022

As someone who has and knows people with severe depression this poem is relatable on many levels. Tgank you for writing this. Bless you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 May 2021

The poem is concerned with people suffering from depression. Depression is debilitating.Those who are close to the sick person, should empathize and find out what exactly is bothering.Amazingly explained in poetic words.

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2019

An insightful piece on depression nicely put together. Thanks for sharing, Narayana.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2018

time for empathy let the sick open their.hearts divine, not pity.......great expression! A beautiful poem! My pleasure reading it time and again!

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Naila Rais 04 June 2018

I totally agree with you... Date with death, date with suicidal thoughts..... Ot can be cured? ? But in my opinion suicide is only the way left out be nobody bothers for us...... Hese wild, harsh, criel individuals destroyed the world... Naila

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narayana aghalaya 04 June 2018

Thank you Naila Rais for agreeing with my views and also for your powerful comments!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2018

time for empathy let the sick open their.hearts divine, not pity. depression is a very common phenomena in the industrial world. simple love, laughter, smile, a hand shake, loving words, kindness, nearness........ very often these are the best medicines. i know so many hwo are suffering.. we shall do our best to alleviate their sufferings.. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 April 2018

God alone is judge man's laws can't catch delinquent abusers don't budge.................................well penned dear poet! I vote this fabulous poem with a 10

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Narayana Aghalaya 19 April 2018

thank you, Dr.Swain for your lovely comments and appreciation!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 April 2018

Narayana, such a fine poem....10++++

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Narayana Aghalaya 19 April 2018

Thankyou Dr.Asuncion for your appreciation of my poem.

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 April 2018

A well crafted poem that captures the image of the depressed.10

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Narayana Aghalaya 19 April 2018

Thank you Mr.Cabanes for appreciating my poem. I particularly likely for calling it 'a well crafted poem'. Poets are essentially craftsmen trying to deliver a perfect jewel, not always successfully!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2018

God only the judge who saves us giving justice for karma and forgiveness. He discovers us from depression and shows sympathy. A nice poem is beautifully penned...10

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Narayana Aghalaya 19 April 2018

Thank you Sir for your appreciation of my poem!

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