The Departed Comments

beautiful poem full of pathos!

An insightful piece of poetry depicting the sadness and emptiness that follows the burial of loved one. A well articulated poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rizwan. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Writing helps purge the feelings associated with loss. Thanks, Rizwan

I'm taken back in that cemetery To a cold dark corner, tranquil in perpetual shadow Far away and sequestered On a little piece of hallowed ground Where broken hearts are buried................Nice flow and good poem to read.10