Tuesday, January 10, 2006

The Dent In His Chest Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to get you naked
to see the outlines of your ribs,
your imperfections;
every last one that make you feel insignificant-
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Amberlee Carter
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Alan Curtis 26 June 2008

I just love ur style of writing Amberlee, it makes me feel as if my poems r matched by urs n a spirital way.10 out of 10 grl! Peace and love Hippy sav

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Uriah Hamilton 14 January 2006

a poem navigating both physical and spiritual worlds, does she speak to a lover or does she drift back into time to find scars that can't heal on the body of the ultimate lover?

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