I sensed myself sinking down
Culminating the stuccoes of existence
Crossing denouements of mortality
Obeying the laws of life's caducity
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Hi Nayanika,
A poem on the eternal truth; the ultimate truth of life: : DEATH! Very profound write with a matching choice of vocabulary. Loved reading, though, on one or two occasions, I had to refer to dictionary..
A marvelous ten for this lovely but poignant poem; I would another 10 for the following lines:
I roused to realize
That my sweven
Toured me down
To the afterlife lane
To forgraith me
For the next realm of existence.
-unnikrishnan
Respected Sir,
It is really a great honor for me to get a compliment from you. Your words of appraisal encourage me and your verses inspire me to write poems with deep feelings. Immense thanks!
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Hi Nayanika, A poem on the eternal truth; the ultimate truth of life: : DEATH! Very profound write with a matching choice of vocabulary. Loved reading, though, on one or two occasions, I had to refer to dictionary.. A marvelous ten for this lovely but poignant poem; I would another 10 for the following lines: I roused to realize That my sweven Toured me down To the afterlife lane To forgraith me For the next realm of existence. -unnikrishnan
Respected Sir, It is really a great honor for me to get a compliment from you. Your words of appraisal encourage me and your verses inspire me to write poems with deep feelings. Immense thanks!