Saturday, June 24, 2017

The Denouement Comments

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I sensed myself sinking down
Culminating the stuccoes of existence
Crossing denouements of mortality
Obeying the laws of life's caducity
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NAYANIKA DEY
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 June 2017

Hi Nayanika, A poem on the eternal truth; the ultimate truth of life: : DEATH! Very profound write with a matching choice of vocabulary. Loved reading, though, on one or two occasions, I had to refer to dictionary.. A marvelous ten for this lovely but poignant poem; I would another 10 for the following lines: I roused to realize That my sweven Toured me down To the afterlife lane To forgraith me For the next realm of existence. -unnikrishnan

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Nayanika Dey 24 June 2017

Respected Sir, It is really a great honor for me to get a compliment from you. Your words of appraisal encourage me and your verses inspire me to write poems with deep feelings. Immense thanks!

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Durgapur, West Bengal, India
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