Monday, March 20, 2017

The Demon Within Comments

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The demon within

Inside the closet of the mind
is where he resides,
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Rebecca Lyle
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The Hobbler 28 March 2017

Until I read your notes, I was sure that demon was your own mind, some psychological manifestation perhaps suicidal thoughts you try to suppress but to no avail, and the only solution- to end it. your poems are unique, the way you convey your feelings and ideas Flowing from beginning to end. I try to figure it out but it escapes me. which makes your poetry so fascinsting.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 March 2017

I think there is something missing with human laws.

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Rebecca Lyle 21 March 2017

true, my friend, it turned out, his son was in the same class with my 7 year old daughter. He watched me drop her off for school every morning. It took 6 months for tem to catch him and I had to live with him out there. He even called me twice to tell me he was coming to get me again. It has taken a toll on my life. The trial was horrible, reliving every second of it.

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