The Demon Who Haunts My Sleep Comments

it is a new style i came across so far. after all, this would fit more of a writing, essay. however, still, its very descriptive. Family guy? a local show, however, sometimes, i think, it would be better to be more general. like reading a book, watching a show, thinking of you, act like a fool. etc. yea. not trying to say with any sarcasm though. yea. thanks, for your critiques too! ! !