Wednesday, March 19, 2008

The Demon Comments

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The demon inside of me is broken.
My words are totally unspoken.
He makes me hurt anyone or anything I see.
Im surprised he hasn't killing me.
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Shastina McElmurry
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Kerry Abercrombie 14 June 2008

This is a very deep on a literal and metaphorical level, I see a few errors in the line up of words in a single line where a different form would be more clear, but over all i love the poem. And thank you for the comment on my poem, it means alot. Email me: Xexx_Demone@hotmail.com if you would like me to explain why I wrote the poem, It's always nice for a person to see themselves in someone else's writings, and with the speaking of Growth in mine, I feel honoured you and proud that you see your self so well in it

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Janetta Mcelmurry 25 March 2008

is there really a demon in you

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Shastina McElmurry

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