Wednesday, November 27, 2013

The Delight In Harmony Comments

Rating: 5.0

All around us are colours, vibrant and varied
Earth never is left dull in sombre shades of grey
God has created an assortment of shades
To feast our eyes and make us gay
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2021

Though the poem is a bit lengthy, i read it one go dear madam. I profusely admire the illustrious beauty of the poem...sheer captivating. Top score and to my favourite!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2015

In this poem Valsa appears as a prism that decomposes the divine white light into VIBGYOR........10

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Queeny Gona 09 December 2013

Superb read mam. The curiosity that ran me through out the poem revealed the suspense in a delightfull tone. Wonderful message has been given through this poem dear mam for example: unity, each one has equal role, all are equal in thesight of LORD!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 December 2013

Beautiful write on Rainbow. Beautiful rainbow is formed when all colors remain in harmony. Beautiful message. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rubab Atwal 07 December 2013

a very beautiful poem.enjoyed it.

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Dee Corpolongo 01 December 2013

What a beautifully written poem of the gifts given to us from our Lord, so high and mighty, to nature, so beautiful and exquisite, irreplaceable and free......the greatest show that can be.

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Susy Evelyne 01 December 2013

All the other reviewers have expressed what I would have said - so I will say what a fantastic, creative poem, Valsa! 10/10!

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Joseph Anderson 30 November 2013

A brilliant analysis of God and natures blending of earths colorization. Smootly done and did I see some rhyme? A grand and glorious poem

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Yasmin Khan 30 November 2013

A wonderful poem with a message and personification of colors is surprising, It's pure imagination.

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2013

You have put so much into these words, beautifully pieced together full of glorious colour. Thank you

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 November 2013

Aha ended up as a rainbow solution to their bickering. Yeah awesome impresive. Although green is d pervasive color in nature accordin to research yet other colors peek along too in fine contrast. Valsa u r a creative fellow indian poetess! Kudos!

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It is now the eternal tragedy of mankind That the colour grey now has spread far and wide It would have been better we were born colour blind Being unable to appreciate Gods pallette varied and wild............ Very good poem madam, keep on the good work

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Kavya . 28 November 2013

marvellous poem...am speechless..........the story of a Rainbow created in such a beautiful manner is really worth appreciating Mam

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 November 2013

The crescent in the sky is the delightful rainbow. Beautiful poem giving harmony of colors. A great poem for all ages. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 27 November 2013

A beautiful story Valsa. All colours are but components of white light, the most celestial and pure colour of all.

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Dinesan Madathil 27 November 2013

I have never read such a graceful and vivid description of the evolution of a rainbow in the form of a poem that falls like water from a silver jar. The conversing seasonal beauty of the sky has emerged here as yet another object for microscopic contemplation by a poet whose mind has of late been on board off the mundane world far down. The story of the rainbow is a fine tribute to her/him about whom neither William Wordsworth nor P.B.Shelley did muse and muse much. An excellent piece of perfect blends, Madam Valsa. Here is my fifth 10 for you since October.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 November 2013

Yes indeed, and an amazing one!

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