Sunday, May 4, 2008

The Deflowering Comments

Rating: 5.0

A mauve pashmina sliding
Along the body stem
Swishing by sweet bulbs hiding
Like an exquiste gem
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Pasquale DiMeola
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Patti Masterman 31 August 2009

I love the teasing nature of this poem which fits perfectly with the title, as no doubt you crafted it to be exactly that way. I love the last lines; they complete the picture and make a full silhouette that I can just make out as she crosses the street ahead..

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Pasquale DiMeola

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