Sunday, January 6, 2008

The Defete Comments

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The aroma of life has long been expired
Wispering sounds of silence can be heard everywhere
The darkness now seemed like a tunnel without light
The vision of uncertainy has long been blinded
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Bonnie Collins
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Khairul Ahsan 19 July 2013

The beauty has now finally elapsed into its own cocoon The rage of its turmoil has ended These lines are sounding in my ears again and again. Difficult time explained with ease.

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Craig Anderson 19 February 2008

Stunning description of a very very sad time in your life. I know. And like Bobbie said thank you for sharing it.

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Bobbie Jean Wright 12 January 2008

This must be a hard door to go through in life. I still have my father but I am watching as a vigorous man becomes weak and unhealthy. I cannot yet face what that will mean in the future. I'm sorry for your loss. *huggs* Thank you for sharing such a tender time in your life with us. Bj

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Nana Nana 10 January 2008

very well expressed..

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Bonnie Collins

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