Sunday, February 16, 2014
The Defeat Of A Poet Comments
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Two times a better thought than forlorn
to accept defeat is a great difficulty
an upsurge of dreams that cannot be forsaken
an emotion that brings back memories
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8/2/2025 4:16:15 PM # 1.0.0
Your ideas are good, yet your sentences run together too much. In the first stanza I can make three sentences that make sense to the one that is written. Thoughts are hurriedly rushed together with no pauses to reflect on what you're saying. Otherwise, this poem is very good with meaning. Like what you're saying. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn