Wednesday, January 11, 2012

The Deep Whispers Comments

Rating: 5.0

They in a rhythm cling and see,
Thousand times the shore and the sea;
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Neethu Prasanna
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Patricia Grantham 13 October 2013

Natures whispers are beautiful to see and experience. When sand and wind and water mixes this creates a wonderful scenery which can't be imitated by man. very inspiring.

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticesed by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way you do. I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit, I am sure. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. Have a nice day Neethu and keep writing....

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!

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Sunil Ramu 15 September 2013

I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. I won't request a visit from you. Nor will I suggest a poem. Have a nice day!

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Valsa George 19 April 2013

Exquisitely beautiful! ! The sea and shore in eternal embrace! This highly rhyming poem brings waves of joy one after another in unbroken succession ! !

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Kavya . 04 April 2013

wow u have really written this very beautifully, the rhythm of the sea, the calm shore, the broken turtle eggs, v nice...thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Vivek Tiwari 19 March 2013

Very nice. Well reached the message of Nature her whispers. Loved the poem.

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R.k Das 19 March 2013

'''Again in the rhythm they cling and see, How many more, the shore and the sea? ... ''''' the beauty of the poem, , the beauty of the sea of eternity, , the beauty of shore, , waves, , the horizon, , the sea gull.. the surfy water, , the fisherman and his oscilating boat like a speck on the far and deep blue waters, , , , are all absorbed in the eyes of the 'two' onlookers nostalgically remembering those day, , the sight and rhythm get merged into the deep whispers, , actually a 'deep sigh'' thanx for such a beautiful poem, , thanx

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R.k Das 19 March 2013

'''Again in the rhythm they cling and see, How many more, the shore and the sea? ... ''''' the beauty of the poem, , the beauty of the sea of eternity, , the beauty of shore, , waves, , the horizon, , the sea gull.. the surfy water, , the fisherman and his oscilating boat like a speck on the far and deep blue waters, , , , are all absorbed in the eyes of the 'two' onlookers nostalgically remembering those day, , the sight and rhythm get merged into the deep whispers, , actually a 'deep sigh'' thanx for such a beautiful poem, , thanx

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Indranil Bhaduri 14 November 2012

Fantastic...Short of words to express my appreciation.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 February 2012

They in a rhythm cling and see, Thousand times the shore and the sea; They wait only for a small wee Then again they touch in glee; Excellent depiction/top marks! ! !

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