They in a rhythm cling and see,
Thousand times the shore and the sea;
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I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!
I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!
I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticesed by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way you do. I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit, I am sure. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. Have a nice day Neethu and keep writing....
I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!
I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. To the untrained eye, they are all the same. Have a nice day!
I think the thing that is most impressive to me, is that you seem to be the only writer I have encountered here who understands poetry. What it is and can be. I read the first 5 poems. I'm often criticised by others because they believe, that I believe, poetry must be written the way I do. That, of course, has never been true.I appreciate the way you demonstrate how poetry can be written. This will not be my last visit. I hope to read at the appropriate times. You deserve a top ten position. I hope you remain there, and I will do my part in that. Such quality must be rewarded, or it will be replaced by something less substantial. I won't request a visit from you. Nor will I suggest a poem. Have a nice day!
Exquisitely beautiful! ! The sea and shore in eternal embrace! This highly rhyming poem brings waves of joy one after another in unbroken succession ! !
wow u have really written this very beautifully, the rhythm of the sea, the calm shore, the broken turtle eggs, v nice...thoroughly enjoyed it!
Very nice. Well reached the message of Nature her whispers. Loved the poem.
'''Again in the rhythm they cling and see, How many more, the shore and the sea? ... ''''' the beauty of the poem, , the beauty of the sea of eternity, , the beauty of shore, , waves, , the horizon, , the sea gull.. the surfy water, , the fisherman and his oscilating boat like a speck on the far and deep blue waters, , , , are all absorbed in the eyes of the 'two' onlookers nostalgically remembering those day, , the sight and rhythm get merged into the deep whispers, , actually a 'deep sigh'' thanx for such a beautiful poem, , thanx
'''Again in the rhythm they cling and see, How many more, the shore and the sea? ... ''''' the beauty of the poem, , the beauty of the sea of eternity, , the beauty of shore, , waves, , the horizon, , the sea gull.. the surfy water, , the fisherman and his oscilating boat like a speck on the far and deep blue waters, , , , are all absorbed in the eyes of the 'two' onlookers nostalgically remembering those day, , the sight and rhythm get merged into the deep whispers, , actually a 'deep sigh'' thanx for such a beautiful poem, , thanx
They in a rhythm cling and see, Thousand times the shore and the sea; They wait only for a small wee Then again they touch in glee; Excellent depiction/top marks! ! !
Natures whispers are beautiful to see and experience. When sand and wind and water mixes this creates a wonderful scenery which can't be imitated by man. very inspiring.