Saturday, August 26, 2023

The Deep Wheel And The Blue Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was once a delicate thin paper and full of dullness.
Every time you ghosted away, I became inwardly lifeless.
You didn't even look twice and painted the whole sky blue.
Oblivious to my sound presence, I'm feeling high and hue.
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Enchanting Owl
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S December 26 August 2023

whhhhhhhhhhhaaaat, this is the best

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S S 26 August 2023

what a well-penned poem,5/5

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Julrick Verallo 26 August 2023

the lines are so impactful, what a poet

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CJ DG 26 August 2023

solid 5 for this poem

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M H 26 August 2023

this is perfect, it fits so much, thanks young poet

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Acir Eryat 26 August 2023

this is so beautifully made, thanks

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