Tuesday, February 10, 2009
The Deep Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Submerged within this peaceful sea
where quiet death has crept.
The surface shimmered above me
from tears as Angels wept.
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Sreelekha Premjit
11 February 2009
There's much beauty in nature and it takes a clever eye to spot it...The deep sea is a bewitching seductress...a lovely write.
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~ Jon London ~
10 February 2009
Beautifully stunning picture, what a fine poem you have painted.10 Best wishes Jon
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7/19/2025 9:22:24 PM # 1.0.0
Your wonderful poem is quite beautifully written, Terry, and filled with purely outstanding imagery in every verse. It paints a sublime picture that every reader can well relate with. I do not know how long you have been writing poetry, but I noticed that you do not follow any fixed syllable count in your poetry. Doing that allows for a better rhythm in poetry. Still, since this poem is written in the free verse style, a similar syllable count in each line is not necessary. This poem is expressed very well as it is. Carl.