Sunday, April 2, 2023

The Deed Comments

Rating: 5.0

We're taking ourselves to be above God
Making the same mistake brother, now nod
Lucifer made and look what a mess
We've created of nature with great success
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Pallavi Tripathi
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M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2023

We have become very insensitive towards our surroundings and in for more and more we are destroying the nature and its very fabric. A thoughtful poem, indeed. Full *****

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M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2023

In our greed to have more and more we are destroying the nature. A very thoughtful poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 April 2023

Beautiful poem for Holy Week Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 April 2023

Fascinating poem, I wish you a PalmSunday today and 5 Stars for these honest words

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