Tuesday, August 2, 2016

The Deceiving Dreams Comments

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A deceiving dawn when starts my day,
And she when wears a lovely contrast,
Shocking pink prints, bluish back ground,
See a passing show of the dancers at last.
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2016

Relived the best days of life again with this wonderful poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 03 August 2016

You will never grow old as long as you can still remember! ! thank you sir-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2016

Moonlight shines and Divine technician definitely modifies dream with charm of light. Very amazingly penned this poem is. Clever presentation makes this interesting....10

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2016

Very well said Charms of youth can never be forgotten. It just means still there is youthfulness in you. Keep riding on the charms of youthfulness Beautiful days well begins here. Heart is never too old to dream. Keep your heart young and evergreen. Beautiful poem. Loved reading each lines.

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Rajnish Manga 02 August 2016

There is an element of youthful images from the past that keeps an energetic man going till the very end. Clay is such a basic substance. This is a co-incidence that the word has appeared in two poems today. Thanks, Akhtar Jawad Sahab, for sharing the poem. I quote: With me are all outcomes of the clay.

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Khalid Saifullah 02 August 2016

A wonderful poem........................................

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2016

You have a wonderful way of describing such things. Yes, There is still a bit of youthful thought in my greying head too

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