Loneliness brings
The death within
And as the bottle empties,
The nightmares begin.
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yep i like it, the words and imagery you use, exactly match the life and dark times alcoholics go through.
Ooh very slickly written, I love the imagery of emotions in this, especially emotions I, at one time, could relate to, yet couldn't quite describe, myself... very astounding..