Monday, September 6, 2021

The Death Of The Perfect Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

He lived a dutiful and honest life
He was the perfect son,
He achieved a top mark in school
He attained a great professional job
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Kevin Patrick
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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2021

My conclusion of your excellent poem: The richest people in wealth can never appreciate or be grateful to his vibrant life, something is always missing, it is better to be the poorest, then every drop of rain is appreciated

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2021

A poem with a meaningful message. Liked how this poem was crafted and presented. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2021

A moving, touching and deeply poignant write. We could never fathom the many faces of life.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 September 2021

Reminds me of a song called Richard Cory by Simon and Gartfunkel based on a poem that is on this site I love yr verison though Bravo!

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