The Death Of Paris Comments
Because he coveted beauty
above wisdom or power,
death would be his destiny.
Wisdom may have saved him.
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A great story told with beautiful imaginary as reading along, it unfolds with every word one as important as the other, nicely penned.
to believe a mortal man, could possess such loveliness, even though he was a prince//=to believe [that] a [mere, common]mortal man /could possess such loveliness, / ignoring that princes are mortals too. {! }
You moved through my fields once again as few could manage it,dear Barry.The hybris of the mortal to attempt what should not was painted marvellously.
The story of Paris and Helen is one of the greatest plot lines of all time in my opinion. Here it is greatly condensed.
I chose silliness over all three. : -) An apt telling of the tale, Barry. A 10
I gave up the other three but I am still working on stillness as a fourth alternative but some days I do favor silliness. Thanks for the read, the comment, and the rating.
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7/23/2025 3:35:36 PM # 1.0.0
An epic retold in a very short, condensed way. This is quite a feat. Congrats.10
Thanks Nosheen. I did leave out a lot of detail.