Monday, April 27, 2015

The Death Of Melody Comments

Rating: 5.0

Think around the verses sung,
The chorus screams loudest.
Shrill cries of agony that drip,
crimson blood, a wrecked soul,
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Dwain Joseph
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Kelly Kurt 27 April 2015

I agree with Chinedu. Well written and eliciting deep thoughts. Thanks for sharing, Dwain. Peace

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Dwain Joseph 28 April 2015

Thank you Kelly, this piece means a lot to me as it came at a very hard time in my life

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Chinedu Dike 27 April 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dwain Joseph 28 April 2015

Thank you very much. I did read it and commented what I believe it meant to me. It did hit home in many ways, loved it.

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