Wednesday, December 16, 2009

The Death Of Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You tear me down
But then try
To pick me up
You break my heart
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Allison Unknown
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Danny H 16 December 2009

Not many words, but its very strong, and very good

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Craig Anderson 16 December 2009

Powerful piece Allison no one likes to be taken for granted, or even worse. Nice write. Regards. Craig

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Joesiah Childs 16 December 2009

hey i like this poem u wrote about yourself am new here and i would like if u can look me up and read some of my poems please and see wat u like thank u

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