The inner and outer realms of life
Remain separated by a veil of unawareness
It's not the thickness of the veil
That hides the truth
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This is one of your finest poems I have read so far, Straight to my favourite list. 100++++++
I love your wonderfully expansive metaphor of the inner journey beyond narrow, self-serving patterns of thought.
Poetry begins where logic ends, they say, and here is a poet talking about Death of Logic in a lovely poem. Well done dear poet.
Beautiful philosophical piece. But in the beginning there must be faith. An unquestionning belief in the institution of God. With 408 ways to believe in god i stay with empirical religion aka science, for, even that was created by God. The difference is that science being the sum total of the things which give us life is so fundamental to well being whereas religion of faith is in the mind. I rest my case. Excellent piece. You write well Rre Maswabi.
Beautiful! I must say I never expected it to have a Christian perspective. You've done well sir.
I am humbled by the kind comments on this poem. Thank you all for your great insights. Yes, logic and faith are some of the most controversial topics. I still believe logic is overrated. Thank you very much once again.