The Death Of Innocence Comments

Swimming in the sea of sadness and drowning in the ditch of despair. A revelation that is rich is raw, rabid realism my friend!

The darkness had won again Another soul in despair When would this all be over? full of emotions. life is not always negative. after a night there is always a dawn. think of that. Despair should never keep us down or allow it to conquer. a day of light and joy comes. be sure. We believe in a God who cares for us. Tony

A highly emotive poem of despair. My heart is filled with sadness. The poet is successful in evoking emotions of sorrow and compassion for the lady. One would like to agree with the poet: 'It seemed like there was no one to care And the thought of this was weakening me As I followed her path right there.' and share similar feelings. Very well written.10/10.

Very sad very very sad poem, almost disastrous. It makes me sad to see a life snuffed off like that. The mistake was when she believe that there was nothing to fight for. Yes there is! Life It is a great gift. I like the poem.well written and emotive Mohabeer Beeharry Read myomere sometimes