Friday, October 16, 2020

The Death Of Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tumbling
Into
Darkness
Deeper
...
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Richard Wlodarski
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Susan Williams 16 October 2020

You selected the perfect structure if this poem- the descending lines echo the falling.. The duel between death and spirit seems to actually struggle on the page before our eyes. We cheer the death of fear by spiritual light! ! ! Top marks! ! A million starry-eyed 10's but I guess you will have to settle for a 5 if PH will finally count my vote!

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