The Death Of Fear Poem by Richard Wlodarski

The Death Of Fear

Rating: 5.0


Tumbling
Into
Darkness
Deeper
Deeper
Deeper
Fear
Stifling
Damn breath
Fear
Crippling
Body
Fear
Winning
Gambling
On life
Spirit
Waking
Seeing
The Light
Sharing
The Light
Fear
Dying
Dying
Dead now

Friday, October 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,spirit
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Emmanuel Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 16 October 2020

You selected the perfect structure if this poem- the descending lines echo the falling.. The duel between death and spirit seems to actually struggle on the page before our eyes. We cheer the death of fear by spiritual light! ! ! Top marks! ! A million starry-eyed 10's but I guess you will have to settle for a 5 if PH will finally count my vote!

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