Tumbling
Into
Darkness
Deeper
Deeper
Deeper
Fear
Stifling
Damn breath
Fear
Crippling
Body
Fear
Winning
Gambling
On life
Spirit
Waking
Seeing
The Light
Sharing
The Light
Fear
Dying
Dying
Dead now
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You selected the perfect structure if this poem- the descending lines echo the falling.. The duel between death and spirit seems to actually struggle on the page before our eyes. We cheer the death of fear by spiritual light! ! ! Top marks! ! A million starry-eyed 10's but I guess you will have to settle for a 5 if PH will finally count my vote!