Tuesday, June 23, 2009

The Death Of A Loved One. Comments

Rating: 5.0

No closure.
No skies.
Everyone but me,
they're all able to cry.
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Brittney Karasek
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No closure. No skies. Everyone but me, they're all able to cry. ..... they are able to cry but not me... so much frief stricken and choked and voice........ yes indeed pain in words and honest word mind it... well done, , , ,10

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Nooruddeen Mm 23 June 2009

A good poem, good flow. Nicely wrote. But Sad Rgds Nooruddeen

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Brittney Karasek

Brittney Karasek

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