The Death And Life Of A Dream Comments

Great stuff!

definately a mouthfu! And a complex sentence....describing a complex indescribable event! i had to read it many times, possibly because i am dimwitted. Maybe i need some punctuationto distinguish the concepts and attach phrases to one another. A tale of tradgedy with a glimmer of hope at the end. I definately have to work at this one.

I LIKE this! And your titles are great! Wonderful, thought provoking stuff! I make this prediction: 'You are going to be writing more! ! ' Don't hold me to that! BUT, I hope so! I can relate to your approach! Nice work... Lawrence