Sunday, November 15, 2015

The Death...And After Comments

Rating: 5.0

The time has come to say good bye,
To this beautiful world for a time,
I was afraid all these times,
But my soul whispered in my ears,
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Lal Parameswar
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Souren Mondal 15 November 2015

A really beautiful, beautiful poem Lal.. The way you handled the 'journey' beyond life is incredible.. The imagery is wonderful... Thanks for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 November 2015

Awe some imagery. Imagination of what effect death causes on a human is really superb. While majority dreads even the concept of approaching one's death, visualizing the same with positive mind set is laudable and it shows tranquility's reign in the mind of that individual. Very beautiful exploration of the dreaded death. Thanks for sharing.10+

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