Saturday, March 19, 2016

The Dear Departed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life has been
A heap of leaves
Dry and drenched,
Shed over centuries
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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alan brown 20 April 2018

thank you for posting enjoyed your poem Subhas.Alan

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

A stanza full of the fulfilment she might have given you while she was with you. Liked it much. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

A stanza full of the fulfilment she might have given you while she was with you. Liked it much.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 27 February 2018

From the ends to ends of My space and time line Are hollowness filling them Every inch of my volume, Every cell of my being..! ! Lovely crafting.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

A beautiful poem on love describing the pure passion within your kind and loving heart.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for the loving remarks and inspiration.

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

Often I embark While gazing far At the end of my horizon From the ends to ends of My space and time line Are hollowness filling them Beautiful poem. Thanks poet. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Sabita, my dear for the loving remarks.

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

In the eyes dreamy that surround Or the hearts sobbing in and around! Where have you been My darling Dee, Will you ever Blink your eyes shut and flee Again into and within me? A very beautiful poem of love linking life. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Priyanka dear for the loving remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 19 May 2016

Often I embark While gazing far At the end of my horizon From the ends to ends of My space and time line Are hollowness filling them Every inch of my volume, Makes me feel a high pitch of painful note. Thanks Subhas for creating the spell. 10 for this. Nitu.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for the loving remarks on the poem.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

Often I embark While gazing far At the end of my horizon From the ends to ends of My space and time line Are hollowness filling them Every inch of my volume, Every cell of my being..! ! A stanza full of the fulfilment she might have given you while she was with you. Liked it much. Seema

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Rini dear for the loving remarks on the poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

My lost hopes and dreams shattered! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you revered Sir for the loving remarks on the poem.

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