Friday, September 30, 2005

The Deadly Flu Comments

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They say we'll be affected.
Millions are to die.
Then they say don't worry
as if we'll give a sigh.
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Mary Nagy
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Uriah Hamilton 30 September 2005

Dear Mary, I love you and your concern, and I agree with Black Magic Woman, you should eat well, but I wish her name was Positively Fourth Street!

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Ernestine Northover 30 September 2005

Well Mary, they never let us have a rest do they. It's always something or other that we are going to have to face, They send everyone into a panic. What is the point if there is nothing we can do to prevent it. I hate these scaremongers they really spoil your day, don't they. Sincerely Ernestine. Well written on the subject.

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Mary Nagy 30 September 2005

Thanks..........................

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Alice Vedral Rivera 30 September 2005

Mary - I believe that it's is correct. It is the contraction of 'it is' as opposed to the possessive form of the pronoun it - which is its. Good poem by the the way. avr

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 September 2005

Mary, please correct it's to its in the second stanza.There is a way to protect yourself but it is not available at the local MD's office. H

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Theorem Thetruthserum 30 September 2005

Good poem...yeah this is a big cycle that our world goes through. It comes when the world is over populated. Through medication we have kept it away, but I know that it is just mutating it. Everybody using anti-bacterial soap is mutating bacteria too...but no one tells us because it sells.

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