Saturday, April 14, 2012

The Deadly Dead Dentifrice A.K.A. Mr. Toothpaste. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brought froM a store brand new
me was inside mY packet blue
which Someone tore in shreds a few
these man-iacs are savages me knew.
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Rajkamal P.j 07 September 2012

a lively and funny poem.congrats

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Shubham Koul 06 May 2012

this poetry was interesting as well as funny.... :) any one would hardly imagine to make a poetry on a toothpaste...which makes this poetry so special.....

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

vision of a great poet who is one with the poety..it's really beautiful

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Aditi Khandelwal 16 April 2012

This is so funny....! Love it! Aditi

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Ramesh Rai 16 April 2012

An unique way to write and a beautiful poem also

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Vijay Sai R 15 April 2012

a beautiful poem, so strange yet so special...

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Neela Nath Das 15 April 2012

Oh! I laughed a lot. Really nice.Hey, we shouldn't use toothpaste!

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Abhishek Tiwari 14 April 2012

Thats a poet budding within u my boy! I loved it to the ewtent that..for the 1st time some1s death made me laugg..(sorry Mr. Toothpaste)

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