The Dead Swan..... Comments

This was very well written. You have a really nice flow in your lines here.

impressive poem, a great tribute, heart rending

A very unusual subject and a beautiful write.

Oh! A great poem pulling the chords of my heart for the dead Swan.A poignant write which remains. Thanks and best wishes.

A fine tribute to a majestic bird. I got a bit lost in the second verse. Am I right, she ate the fruit of ivy which was growing on her favourite oak and in turn it twisted her intestine. Lovely imagery the vine strangling the tree and then her life. The oak home to the swan, oblivious to her plight. A fine sensitive write.