Unsteady quiet, lonely as it sounds,
Avoided like a plague
It’s the dead of silence
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Talk about lonely, this was a poem that took its sweet time getting posted... found this very haunting, and certainly have been there before... know what you're talking about. I try to avoid it like the plague too. Good pacing, brings out the lonely aspect, which you achieved easily... I don't know if that's a compliment though lol Great job sis! Lee
Sentimental but emotionally sound.... hurt can be felt in dead silence, makes one reminisce the monent a love one leaves. Splendid work. another 10.