Wednesday, July 15, 2009

The Dead Mosquito Comments

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It was dark and lovely,
i felt so hungry.
the breeze,
so cool like it blown at the beach.
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Brian Jani 27 June 2014

Nice i enjoyed how you stepped out of the box to deliver this brilliant poem

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 13 October 2009

aha yes! A wonderful picture of the 'mozzie' as we call them in Ireland....although I don't know why seeing as we don't have mosquitoes in Ireland! ! ! I remember being in Kenya once where the place was riddled with them....nasty things...but I guess all God's creatures have a right to live even if it is only for a very short time with those blasted insects! ! ! Good composition, keep it up, you have a succinct if not subtle poetic voice. Well done! ! Your friend, in verse, Ruth

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