The Dead End Comments
'I looked above and tried to find'
Those lovely eyes which were so kind
I trusted her and remained completely dependent
She was around me all the time and present
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Ekaterina Polishchuk when i read the poem: long or short i always enjoyed the melody it sounds (since my childhood) . and i tell if the melody flows, the poem is successfull. i mean it has its own mystic energy to give us a massage. i like thi poem because of its rhyme structure and contest, it sonds bright. about an hour ago · Like
SoldierBlue Blue Wonderful post Hasmukh...life bonds are nought easily broken...only the flesh of our spirits...enjoyed it......SoldierBlue 4 minutes ago · Like
Though the poem is long, I did not stop somewhere to breathe! The feeling of a lonely human on the departed soul! Hasmukh Amathalal! Good!
“I looked above and tried to find” Those lovely eyes which were so kind
“I looked above and tried to find” Those lovely eyes which were so kind
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eautiful words Aadeesh Shastry17 minutes ago Nice rhyming and beautiful words