The dead drunk I help In their inimitable Way they thank me very Profusely and fart in my ... Read full text
Not by any means an expert on the form, but I think the third and fifth lines are both one syllable too many. Other than that, it is a great tanka
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7/22/2025 6:08:43 PM # 1.0.0
Not by any means an expert on the form, but I think the third and fifth lines are both one syllable too many. Other than that, it is a great tanka